tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1786959741617270801.post5319981282953366095..comments2023-05-12T10:06:02.263-04:00Comments on Everdello: More RevisionsJoanne Stanbridgehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04157005205016916496noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1786959741617270801.post-44346704367132744522010-02-12T08:34:46.881-05:002010-02-12T08:34:46.881-05:00I love your drawings. I do have a couple comments ...I love your drawings. I do have a couple comments which I hope you will find constructive. In the scene in the concert hall. the gentlemen next to the enthusiastic man needs a slight change to his eyes and mouth. He seems to like the concert. The people in the background are just right. I really like the snow scene but I like the pencil drawing better for the following reasons. I like the gentlemen walking across the street in the pencil drawing better Because of the shading on his shoes, the smaller head, angle and size of the left arm, and the slightly taller hat. Thank you for sharing your art work I so enjoy it.Hollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15845252729189467819noreply@blogger.com